From 77e322afa644e9c3a75182c263d92aaa722d874d Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: Adam Warner Date: Tue, 5 Oct 2021 16:25:29 +0100 Subject: [PATCH] (docs) update README.md (#4371) - correct grammar - correct punctuation - correct pronoun usage Co-authored-by: Vladislav Doster Signed-off-by: Adam Warner Co-authored-by: Vladislav Doster --- README.md | 32 ++++++++++++++++---------------- 1 file changed, 16 insertions(+), 16 deletions(-) diff --git a/README.md b/README.md index 06f541f4..b993cfe9 100644 --- a/README.md +++ b/README.md @@ -11,9 +11,9 @@

-The Pi-hole® is a [DNS sinkhole](https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/DNS_Sinkhole) that protects your devices from unwanted content, without installing any client-side software. +The Pi-hole® is a [DNS sinkhole](https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/DNS_Sinkhole) that protects your devices from unwanted content without installing any client-side software. -- **Easy-to-install**: our versatile installer walks you through the process, and takes less than ten minutes +- **Easy-to-install**: our versatile installer walks you through the process and takes less than ten minutes - **Resolute**: content is blocked in _non-browser locations_, such as ad-laden mobile apps and smart TVs - **Responsive**: seamlessly speeds up the feel of everyday browsing by caching DNS queries - **Lightweight**: runs smoothly with [minimal hardware and software requirements](https://docs.pi-hole.net/main/prerequisites/) @@ -22,7 +22,7 @@ The Pi-hole® is a [DNS sinkhole](https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/DNS_Sinkhole) th - **Versatile**: can optionally function as a [DHCP server](https://discourse.pi-hole.net/t/how-do-i-use-pi-holes-built-in-dhcp-server-and-why-would-i-want-to/3026), ensuring *all* your devices are protected automatically - **Scalable**: [capable of handling hundreds of millions of queries](https://pi-hole.net/2017/05/24/how-much-traffic-can-pi-hole-handle/) when installed on server-grade hardware - **Modern**: blocks ads over both IPv4 and IPv6 -- **Free**: open source software which helps ensure _you_ are the sole person in control of your privacy +- **Free**: open source software that helps ensure _you_ are the sole person in control of your privacy ----- @@ -57,21 +57,21 @@ Please refer to the [Pi-hole docker repo](https://github.com/pi-hole/docker-pi-h Once the installer has been run, you will need to [configure your router to have **DHCP clients use Pi-hole as their DNS server**](https://discourse.pi-hole.net/t/how-do-i-configure-my-devices-to-use-pi-hole-as-their-dns-server/245) which ensures that all devices connecting to your network will have content blocked without any further intervention. -If your router does not support setting the DNS server, you can [use Pi-hole's built-in DHCP server](https://discourse.pi-hole.net/t/how-do-i-use-pi-holes-built-in-dhcp-server-and-why-would-i-want-to/3026); just be sure to disable DHCP on your router first (if it has that feature available). +If your router does not support setting the DNS server, you can [use Pi-hole's built-in DHCP server](https://discourse.pi-hole.net/t/how-do-i-use-pi-holes-built-in-dhcp-server-and-why-would-i-want-to/3026); be sure to disable DHCP on your router first (if it has that feature available). -As a last resort, you can always manually set each device to use Pi-hole as their DNS server. +As a last resort, you can manually set each device to use Pi-hole as their DNS server. ----- -## Pi-hole is free, but powered by your support +## Pi-hole is free but powered by your support -There are many reoccurring costs involved with maintaining free, open source, and privacy-respecting software; expenses which [our volunteer developers](https://github.com/orgs/pi-hole/people) pitch in to cover out-of-pocket. This is just one example of how strongly we feel about our software, as well as the importance of keeping it maintained. +There are many reoccurring costs involved with maintaining free, open source, and privacy-respecting software; expenses which [our volunteer developers](https://github.com/orgs/pi-hole/people) pitch in to cover out-of-pocket. This is just one example of how strongly we feel about our software and the importance of keeping it maintained. Make no mistake: **your support is absolutely vital to help keep us innovating!** ### [Donations](https://pi-hole.net/donate) -Sending a donation using our Sponsor Button is **extremely helpful** in offsetting a portion of our monthly expenses and rewarding our dedicated development team: +Donating using our Sponsor Button is **extremely helpful** in offsetting a portion of our monthly expenses: ### Alternative support @@ -83,13 +83,13 @@ If you'd rather not donate (_which is okay!_), there are other ways you can help - [Digital Ocean](https://www.digitalocean.com/?refcode=344d234950e1) _affiliate link_ - [Stickermule](https://www.stickermule.com/unlock?ref_id=9127301701&utm_medium=link&utm_source=invite) _earn a $10 credit after your first purchase_ - [Amazon US](http://www.amazon.com/exec/obidos/redirect-home/pihole09-20) _affiliate link_ -- Spreading the word about our software, and how you have benefited from it +- Spreading the word about our software and how you have benefited from it ### Contributing via GitHub We welcome _everyone_ to contribute to issue reports, suggest new features, and create pull requests. -If you have something to add - anything from a typo through to a whole new feature, we're happy to check it out! Just make sure to fill out our template when submitting your request; the questions that it asks will help the volunteers quickly understand what you're aiming to achieve. +If you have something to add - anything from a typo through to a whole new feature, we're happy to check it out! Just make sure to fill out our template when submitting your request; the questions it asks will help the volunteers quickly understand what you're aiming to achieve. You'll find that the [install script](https://github.com/pi-hole/pi-hole/blob/master/automated%20install/basic-install.sh) and the [debug script](https://github.com/pi-hole/pi-hole/blob/master/advanced/Scripts/piholeDebug.sh) have an abundance of comments, which will help you better understand how Pi-hole works. They're also a valuable resource to those who want to learn how to write scripts or code a program! We encourage anyone who likes to tinker to read through it and submit a pull request for us to review. @@ -97,9 +97,9 @@ You'll find that the [install script](https://github.com/pi-hole/pi-hole/blob/ma ## Getting in touch with us -While we are primarily reachable on our [Discourse User Forum](https://discourse.pi-hole.net/), we can also be found on a variety of social media outlets. +While we are primarily reachable on our [Discourse User Forum](https://discourse.pi-hole.net/), we can also be found on various social media outlets. -**Please be sure to check the FAQ's** before starting a new discussion. Many user questions already have answers and can be solved without any additional assistance. +**Please be sure to check the FAQs** before starting a new discussion, as we do not have the spare time to reply to every request for assistance. - [Frequently Asked Questions](https://discourse.pi-hole.net/c/faqs) - [Feature Requests](https://discourse.pi-hole.net/c/feature-requests?order=votes) @@ -125,15 +125,15 @@ Some of the statistics you can integrate include: - Queries cached - Unique clients -The API can be accessed via [`telnet`](https://github.com/pi-hole/FTL), the Web (`admin/api.php`) and Command Line (`pihole -c -j`). You can find out [more details over here](https://discourse.pi-hole.net/t/pi-hole-api/1863). +Access the API via [`telnet`](https://github.com/pi-hole/FTL), the Web (`admin/api.php`) and Command Line (`pihole -c -j`). You can find out [more details over here](https://discourse.pi-hole.net/t/pi-hole-api/1863). ### The Command Line Interface -The [pihole](https://docs.pi-hole.net/core/pihole-command/) command has all the functionality necessary to be able to fully administer the Pi-hole, without the need of the Web Interface. It's fast, user-friendly, and auditable by anyone with an understanding of `bash`. +The [pihole](https://docs.pi-hole.net/core/pihole-command/) command has all the functionality necessary to fully administer the Pi-hole, without the need of the Web Interface. It's fast, user-friendly, and auditable by anyone with an understanding of `bash`. Some notable features include: -- [Whitelisting, Blacklisting and Regex](https://docs.pi-hole.net/core/pihole-command/#whitelisting-blacklisting-and-regex) +- [Whitelisting, Blacklisting, and Regex](https://docs.pi-hole.net/core/pihole-command/#whitelisting-blacklisting-and-regex) - [Debugging utility](https://docs.pi-hole.net/core/pihole-command/#debugger) - [Viewing the live log file](https://docs.pi-hole.net/core/pihole-command/#tail) - [Updating Ad Lists](https://docs.pi-hole.net/core/pihole-command/#gravity) @@ -149,7 +149,7 @@ This [optional dashboard](https://github.com/pi-hole/AdminLTE) allows you to vie Some notable features include: -- Mobile friendly interface +- Mobile-friendly interface - Password protection - Detailed graphs and doughnut charts - Top lists of domains and clients