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 ((("open source licenses")))((("Nakamoto, Satoshi")))Bitcoin is an _open
 source_ project and the source code is available under an open (MIT)
-license, free to download and use for any purpose. Open source means
-more than simply free to use. It also means that bitcoin is developed by
+license, free to download and use for any purpose.  More than just being
+open source, Bitcoin is developed by
 an open community of volunteers. At first, that community consisted of
 only Satoshi Nakamoto. By 2016, bitcoin's source code had more than 400
 contributors with about a dozen developers working on the code almost