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@@ -4,44 +4,42 @@ addition, many concepts that are relevant to contempory Bitcoin
 development in 2023 have been added.
 
 <<ch04_keys_addresses>>::
-  Rearrange address info so that we work through everything in
+  We rearranged the address info so that we work through everything in
   historical order, adding a new section with P2PK (where "address" was "IP
-  address"), refresh the previous P2PKH and P2SH sections, and then add new
+  address"), refreshed the previous P2PKH and P2SH sections, and then added new
   sections for segwit/bech32 and taproot/bech32m.
 
-Old chapters 6 and 7::
-  Text from previous versions of Chapter 6 "Transactions" and Chapter 7
-  "Advanced transactions" has been rearranged and expanded across four
-  new chapters:  pass:[<a data-type="xref" data-xrefstyle="chap-num-title" href="#c_transactions">#c_transactions</a>]  (the structure of txes), pass:[<a data-type="xref" data-xrefstyle="chap-num-title" href="#c_authorization_authentication">#c_authorization_authentication</a>] ,  pass:[<a data-type="xref" data-xrefstyle="chap-num-title" href="#c_signatures">#c_signatures</a>], and
+Old Chapters 6 and 7::
+  Text from previous versions of Chapter 6, "Transactions," and Chapter 7,
+  "Advanced Transactions," has been rearranged and expanded across four
+  new chapters:  pass:[<a data-type="xref" data-xrefstyle="chap-num-title" href="#c_transactions">#c_transactions</a>]  (the structure of txes), pass:[<a data-type="xref" data-xrefstyle="chap-num-title" href="#c_authorization_authentication">#c_authorization_authentication</a>] , pass:[<a data-type="xref" data-xrefstyle="chap-num-title" href="#c_signatures">#c_signatures</a>], and
    pass:[<a data-type="xref" data-xrefstyle="chap-num-title" href="#tx_fees">#tx_fees</a>].
 
 <<c_transactions>>::
-  Almost entirely new text describing the structure of a transaction.
+  We added almost entirely new text describing the structure of a transaction.
 
 <<c_authorization_authentication>>::
-  New text about MAST, P2C, scriptless multisignatures, taproot, and
+  We added new text about MAST, P2C, scriptless multisignatures, taproot, and
   tapscript.
 
 <<c_signatures>>::
-  Revision of ECDSA text and new text about schnorr signatures,
+  We revised the  ECDSA text and added new text about schnorr signatures,
   multisignatures, and threshold signatures.
 
 <<tx_fees>>::
-  Almost entirely new text about fees, RBF and CPFP fee
+  We added almost entirely new text about fees, RBF and CPFP fee
   bumping, transaction pinning, package relay, and CPFP carve-out.
 
 <<bitcoin_network_ch08>>::
-  New text about compact block relay, significant update to bloom
-  filters (describe problems), new text about compact block filters.
+  We added text about compact block relay, added a significant update to bloom filters that better describes their privacy problems, and new text about compact block filters.
 
 <<blockchain>>::
-  New text about signet.
+  We added text about signet.
 
 <<mining>>::
-  New text about BIP8 and speedy trial.
+  We added text about BIP8 and speedy trial.
 
 Appendixes::
-  Remove library-specific appendixes.  Added an appendix after the
-  whitepaper with errata to the whitepaper.
+  We removed library-specific appendixes. After the appendix containing the original whitepaper, we added a new appendix describing how the implementation and properties of Bitcoin differ from those proposed in the whitepaper.
 
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